In Australasia we have been fantastic BLP reciprocal racoons today! In literacy, we have been editing and improving our writing to make it even more fantastic and ensure that our reader is completely hooked.
We worked in pairs to support each in other in the editing process. Firstly, we read our work to each other to make sure it made sense. After this, we started to look at our use of adjectives and emotional language. Together, we thought about how we could change or add vocabulary to engage our reader.
We made sure that we were always being KIND, HELPFUL and SPECIFIC in our feedback!
As a result, we feel that our writing is really starting to improve! We are not there yet, but we have made a brilliant start!